iuventus said:PG, perhaps, you're referring to the melodic changes in the vocal, which sound to me like either an alternative recording or an unused harmony--either way quite deliberate and perfectly in tune.
Ponygurl said:I guess I'm trying to say, the melody flatlines a bit...it should move more with the pitch of her singing. I don't want to put anybody off of it...it just sounds a bit "off" to me. The original is far superior in any case.
iuventus said:As far as the vocal, rewak, I cannot comment on the technical aspect of it. The inversion of the melody, however, is perfectly acceptable from an aesthetic perspective. I don't mean that just as a matter of opinion; though, I love it when composers do that. It certainly follows the rules of harmonics, does it not?
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